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2. Pompous Sentences. Many business writers use a phrase or a whole clause when a well-chosen verb would be much clearer. They do so to try to make themselves appear more knowledgeable or articulate than they actually are. Don?t fall prey to this error by using big words or trite expressions?keep your writing at the level of your reader.

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8. Nonparallel Sentences. Two or more similar (parallel) ideas should be presented in the same pattern, whether within sentences or between sentences. Lack of parallelism creates an awkward style. For example, the clauses in this sentence are not parallel: ?Mr. Reynolds dictated the letter and next he signed it, and left the office.? Compared that to this: ?Mr. Reynolds dictated the letter, signed it Authentic Keith Yandle Jersey , and left the office.?

9. Awkward Pointers. To save words, business writers will often point readers? attention backward with expressions like ?as mentioned above,? ?the aforementioned,? ?the former.? ?the latter,? and so on. Doing so is a distraction to the reader and is usually unnecessary. If a reference does need to be made, it?s better to name or restate the specific thing being referred to.

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BEIJING, Dec. 12 (Xinhua) -- After recording a 111-109 win, Qingdao became the first team to have beaten leaders Liaoning in 2014-15 Chinese Basketball Association (CBA) league on Friday, snapping the latter's 17-game winning streak, best in their franchise history.


Qingdao's foreign trio Cheap Jared McCann Jersey , Justin Dentmon, Michael Harris and Hamed Ehadadi, combined for 73 points.


Qingdao's Luo Xudong hit a jumper to put his team ahead 111-109 with 4.3 seconds to go, while Liaoning still had the chance to drag the game into overtime, as their pillar post player Han Dejun was fouled by his counterpart Hamed Ehadadi with 1.1 seconds remaining.


However, Han missed the first free throw. As he tried to get a rebound from the second intentional missed shot Cheap Jamie McGinn Jersey , Hamed Ehadadi tipped the ball away from the post to secure the win.


"The first half was to blame for the loss, when we had poor defense and didn't concentrate a lot," said Guo Shiqiang, Liaoning's head coach.


Lester Hudson, last season's MVP, finished with game-high 44 points Cheap Radim Vrbata Jersey , 13 rebounds and eight steals for Liaoning. Han Dejun added 26.


Thanks to five players' double-digit points, runner-up Guangdong welcomed their 7th straight win after crushing over Zhejiang 133-116.


Yi Jianlian led Guangdong players with 32 points. Will Bynum and Chris Daniels helped with 25 and 17 points respectively.


After trailing by 36-35 as the first quarter ran out, Guangdong made a strong comeback midway through the second period, as Bynum's three-pointers gave them a double-figure margin.


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